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THE SILENCE OF COMMUNICATION - WHEN WORDS ARE NOT ENOUGH

THE SILENCE OF COMMUNICATION - WHEN WORDS ARE NOT ENOUGH
By Vital Butinar

GENRE: Thriller
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A psychological thriller about a couple living modern stressful lives on the verge of breaking up that go camping in the mountains and are forced to deal with each other due to the lack of mobile connectivity and are able to repair their relationship while trying to escape the woods with their lives after being chased by an imaginary stalker that does not even exist.

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Adam Barr

I notice that your loglines are quite long, almost like a short synopsis. They have all the right info but try to keep them around 30 words or so. Here's my take on this one:

A young couple from the city try to save their relationship with a camping trip, but with no cell phones and a mysterious stalker in the woods, they have to rely on each other to escape.

Vital Butinar

Hi Adam Barr . Thank you. You know I've always struggled with loglines. I never seem to figure out a really good way how to shorten it down.

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