THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES

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By Josiah Bridgeman

GENRE: Family, Drama
LOGLINE: A man (Adrian Franklin) who wants to find out who who his late mother was while trying to get closer to the truth. While on this journey, Adrian must find a way to balance his relationship with his family and confront the truth. Will the truth cost Adrian his relationship with his family or will it bring them all closer together?

SYNOPSIS:

A man (Adrian Franklin) who wants to find out who his late mother really is. Along the way, he meets his father and everything he once knew about his mother is put to the test. He learns some new information about his mother as he tries to balance fighting for the truth and fighting to not mess up his relationship with his family. His relationship with his family is changed by a deep dark secret that’s been haunting him for years. Will the truth cost him his family and the bond they once had? Will the truth change his perspective of how he views his mother?

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B A Mason

That's not really a Logline, more of a summary.

Josiah Bridgeman

I know, I’ll change it.

Maurice Vaughan

Hi, Josiah Bridgeman. How about: "A man tries to find out who his late mother really was, despite knowing that his findings might both change his perspective of her and ruin his relationship with his family."

This logline has the main character's goal (find out who his late mother really was) and stakes (his findings might both change his perspective of her and ruin his relationship with his family).

Is there a family member who tries to stop the main character from reaching his goal? That will be his antagonist. Maybe add the antagonist in the logline (or whoever the antagonist is).

Nathaniel Baker

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Josiah Bridgeman

The antagonist is his sister, Jackie Franklin.

Maurice Vaughan

Josiah Bridgeman, does his sister try to stop him from reaching his goal?

Tasha Lewis

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Maurice Vaughan

Ok. What you have for the logline is a summary.

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