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An unnatural murder leads to a strange friendship between the victim's brother and the demonic killer, who is being reluctantly pulled into a cabal of other demons on a mission to increase their numbers by corrupting humanity.
This is my second script. It was finished first in 1998, and spawned an action trilogy that I finished in 2005. I've revamped it considerably since, incorporating much of what I've learned about screenwriting, but it's different enough now that it needs fresh feedback.
I love my trilogy, and it's my goal to get all three scripts modernized and honed down to their ideal form. Although I do have a hard time seeing all three being made, I value them as proof of ability and a good selling point for my skills. They were also insanely fun to write, and gave me experience creating a universe and mythology that further stories could take place in.
Warning: This is a very violent script.