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LEGEND OF WISTERIA FALLS

LEGEND OF WISTERIA FALLS
By Christan Van Slyke

GENRE: Fantasy
LOGLINE: After a spring storm, a rainbow settles on a small town. Weeks after, the townspeople begin to experience mysterious events that intrigue the neighboring cities and forever change Wisteria Falls.
Adam Harper

I like this concept. Would this be a series or a feature? I could imagine it being a series :-)

As a logline I think it works for a series but would need to be more specific for a feature (name the protagonist and more info on the mysterious events)

Christan Van Slyke

I am currently working on the feature length, although it could easily be broken up into a series. I think it would work as either! I appreciate your feedback. I was taught in my screenwriting courses that loglines should be more general, no names, not giving away too much info.

Adam Harper

Hi Christian, totally, you know your story better than anyone else :-)

Also, yes, I read too that it's good to keep the logline general. Usually if there is a central protagonist then I'll include a concise description. Your story sounds more like an ensemble piece in which case it's best not to go into specific characters.

Tracy Simpson

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Wilmer Villanueva

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