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"BLACK SAND" (SEEKING BUYERS)

"BLACK SAND" (SEEKING BUYERS)
By F.C. Lewis

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:

Childhood friends are all stranded on an island with nothing but time, space and anger due to a malefactor.  The ultimate test of survival is at hand and there is no room for error.

Ryan A. Clark

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Ryan A. Clark

I like it. Especially the last one makes for a great tag line on a poster. Just would like a little clarity on who is stranded. Are they friends or foes? Why are they angry? You can use up to 30-40 words in a logline. Hope this helps. Good job!

F.C. Lewis

Thanks for the tip!

Tony Ray

This might have some legs to it. I would think about making it several malefactors (past feuds, scorned lovers, etc.) to keep the action going. Otherwise, it looks good. (Note: I tried rating it 4/5 stars, but my computer is being dumb.)

Tony Ray

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Shahriar Bourbour

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Shahriar Bourbour

Awesome logline. The second line is also good for a movie poster "tagline"

F.C. Lewis

Thanks!

Kenni Ruffin

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