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Childhood friends are all stranded on an island with nothing but time, space and anger due to a malefactor. The ultimate test of survival is at hand and there is no room for error.
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I like it. Especially the last one makes for a great tag line on a poster. Just would like a little clarity on who is stranded. Are they friends or foes? Why are they angry? You can use up to 30-40 words in a logline. Hope this helps. Good job!
Thanks for the tip!
This might have some legs to it. I would think about making it several malefactors (past feuds, scorned lovers, etc.) to keep the action going. Otherwise, it looks good. (Note: I tried rating it 4/5 stars, but my computer is being dumb.)
Awesome logline. The second line is also good for a movie poster "tagline"