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PENALTY FOR REVENGE
By Arthur L Burton III
A teenager from a small town is sexually assaulted and unjustly imprisoned, her hope is to one day stop women from being railroaded by the legal system, but she must first annihilate the trauma in her own life.
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Here's a logline suggestion, Arthur L Burton III:
"After a small-town teenager is sexually assaulted and unjustly imprisoned, she tries to annihilate the trauma in her life so she can one day become a lawyer (????) and stop women from being railroaded by the legal system."
I don't know the story, so this logline might need some work.
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Maurice Vaughan Hey thanks for the suggestion, the first part would definitely work "After a small-town teenager is sexually assaulted and unjustly imprisoned, she tries to annihilate the trauma in her life" I haven't looked at this logline in 3 years.
You're welcome, Arthur L Burton III. Glad the suggestion helps.