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BEAUTIFUL WORLD

BEAUTIFUL WORLD
By Erick Jimenez

GENRE: Thriller, Drama
LOGLINE:

Erick at a young age learns about hatred and strife, death and destruction, despair and regret and sadness and rebirth.

SYNOPSIS:

Film project about bullying, depression, and suicide called "Beautiful World."

This film is a Autobiography/Fiction story based on my life in order to create the world Erick will live in. The film will be rated R as I need the kids age 13-17 to bring someone they trust whether that be a mother or father, brother or sister, cousin, uncle/aunt, teacher, counselor, coach, neighbor or coworker. Whomever it may be because once they walk out of the theater they will begin to open up and tell that person what they have been going through. It my way of saying it's okay to ask for help. I am very passionate about this project, hopefully it will be made into a feature film soon.

To quote Makoto Yukimura from his Manga series Vindland Saga Thor character says to Thorfinn his son" You have no enemies. No one has any enemies. There is no one that you should hurt." My addition to this is oneself is the worst enemy you can have. That is what my film idea Beautiful World is all about. Erick is his worse enemy leading to a path of pain and destruction the majority of his young life.

This is only the beginning of what I have in mind for this film idea. I truly believe I can save the lives of many who are going through depression and on the verge of suicide. I made promise to Mrs. Crowely who her son Justin Luke Crowley passed away on Wednesday May 11, 2016 at the age of 13 and to Mrs. Avila who her daughter Rosalie Avila passed away on Nov 28th, 2017 at the age of 13. Both were bullied at school leading to depression and eventually leading to take their own life. It breaks my hear knowing they will not be able to experience the life they deserve. In my eyes we all lose when someone takes their life especially kids. The youngest new report that I have come across is Ashawnty Davis died on November 30th, 2017 at the age of 10. At that young of an age she came to the conclusion her life did not matter because of the kids at school bullying her. The only Justin, Rosalie and Ashawnty could escape from their emotional and sometimes physical pain was to take their own life. No I can’t let this go on, when I was 10 I never could imagine hurting myself or taking my own life I was an innocent kid back then. To me back then everything was right in the world and that how is should be for these kids only knowing and understanding how the worlds work when they become adults, not when they are just getting started with their life.

BEAUTIFUL WORLD

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Elisabeth Johanna Bennenbroek

Hello, good to hear that your ideas have gone to a production. For young people with a lot of questions how their life can be, can give answers, or even more questions. These times are not easy, when all old rules need to be reformed into a new society.

Erick Jimenez

Thank You Elisabeth for commenting on my film project. Yes these times can be very difficult for many kids and teenagers. The pressure of school reputation and getting good grades in school causes stress on kids when they should be enjoying life. I wrote this story specifically to answer their question “Why me? What did i do to deserve this?” I want them to know that there is someone out there that cares about them. Hopefully I will soon be able to get this film into production stage.

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