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ADM & EIV
By Dustin Bowcott

GENRE: Fantasy, Historical, Horror, Sci-fi
LOGLINE: When a divine alien species becomes marooned on Earth, their interaction with the indigenous Neanderthals creates an epic conflict that will go on to become the basis for the bible.

SYNOPSIS:

The Nphilim, interstellar guardians crash land their biotechnological mother ship (Hvan) on ice age Earth where they encounter a tribe of Neanderthals taking advantage of the lush greenery covering the Long Valley Caldera. On a hunting trip the Neanderthals encounter the Nphilim and attack them, wounding one of them. This enrages Azazel who decides to fight back, damning himself. Azazel transforms into a Daemon and declares his hate for the creatures of Earth. Azazel and Armeros create Helle deep inside Casa Diablo Mountain as a base for their reign over the planet. Inside Helle they have a source of pure Sulfur that they use to maintain something approaching immortality. The rest of the Nphilim, Shemyaza, Penemue and Danel, retreat to Hvan as their laws forbid them from interfering lest they themselves give up their guardian status. Adm is captured along with a few other Neanderthals and taken back to Helle where they are experimented on. Adm escapes and teams up with Kris who was once a Neanderthal but is now grotesquely malformed. Penemue is not happy with the way Azazel is dealing with his rule over the planet and decides to sacrifice himself. Instead of choosing to become Daemon, Penemue transforms into a Neanderthal and teaches the other Neanderthals, including Adm, Kris and Mndi how best to fight back against the Daemon. Azazel creates a new race of beings from Neanderthal and Nphilim genetics, calls them the Cro-Magnon and places them in charge over the Neanderthals. One of those Cro-Magnon is called Eiv and she demonstrates compassion much more so than any of the other Cro-Magnon. She feels sorry for them, thinks of them more as equals. Penemue helps the Neanderthals escape and build an army against Azazel. He also shows them how to defeat Azazel. Azazel attacks the other Nphilim, and Shemyaza escapes into space, crash landing into a comet and altering its trajectory towards Earth. The Neanderthals are betrayed. Penemue is captured and crucified, leaving Adm, Eiv and Kris to face Azazel alone. Adm and Eiv defeat Azazel in Helle, freezing him (Dante-style) mid waist in a sulfur lake. The comet hits the surface of the Earth, obliterating all life upon it. Adm And Eiv, step out of Helle, the only survivors on the planet.

Randall Roffe

maybe

Rutger Oosterhoff

I would watch this movie. Only thing bothering me is that this plays out in America.

"The term EEMH is equivalent to Cro-Magnon Man, or Cro-Magnons, a term derived from the Cro-Magnon rock shelter in southwestern France, where the first EEMH were found in 1868.....

....The earliest known remains of EEMH can be dated to before 40,000 years ago (40 ka) with some certainty: those from Grotta del Cavallo in Italy, and from Kents Cavern in England, radiocarbon dated to 45–41 ka.[4] A number of other early fossils are dated close to or just after 40ka, including fossils found in Romania (Peștera cu Oase, 42–37 ka) and Russia (Kostenki-14, 40–35 ka).[5] The Siberian Ust'-Ishim man, dated to 45 ka, was not geographically found in Europe, and indeed is not part of the "Western Eurasian" genetic lineage, but intermediate between the Western Eurasian and East Asian lineages.[6]"

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/European_early_modern_humans

"Neanderthal extinction began around 40,000 years ago in Europe, after anatomically modern humans had reached the continent. This date, which is based on research published in Nature in 2014, is much earlier than previous estimates, and it was established through improved radio carbon dating methods analyzing 40 sites from Spain to Russia. The survey did not include sites in Asia, where Neanderthals may have survived longer.[1] "

...and then both the last few Neanthertaler and Cro-Magon humans go to America through the Beringstreet or sail (like the Polynesiërs did over the Pacific) to America?

If you can get soem real logic into this, it could be great!!!

Rutger Oosterhoff

.... Checking it out a bit further on simply scripts: http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1366140294/

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