When a restless girl is about to be banished from the school, a single mother challenges the education system to prove the ruthless principal wrong. (inspired by true events)
@Marcin - schools are no longer illegally able to remove or banish students. Most public schools in America include people with special needs in the same classrooms as other students, it would be discrimination if they did not. In addition, you may get into a little hot water by the words you are using in your logline so you may rethink certain words or replace restless with ADHD or whatever her diagnosis plus replace the word dumb. In addition, how is your script different than the other scripts /films out there with a similar scenario. Best of luck
Hi Kacee. Thank you for your feedback – I’ll keep working on it. I wish all the schools and principals were as understanding as you’ve described. It’s a 4-page animation in Float style so no dialogue - only action. Writing a logline for short is a nice exercise. Have a nice day.
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@Marcin - schools are no longer illegally able to remove or banish students. Most public schools in America include people with special needs in the same classrooms as other students, it would be discrimination if they did not. In addition, you may get into a little hot water by the words you are using in your logline so you may rethink certain words or replace restless with ADHD or whatever her diagnosis plus replace the word dumb. In addition, how is your script different than the other scripts /films out there with a similar scenario. Best of luck
Hi Kacee. Thank you for your feedback – I’ll keep working on it. I wish all the schools and principals were as understanding as you’ve described. It’s a 4-page animation in Float style so no dialogue - only action. Writing a logline for short is a nice exercise. Have a nice day.
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