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While dealing with the loss of family, a strong-willed businesswoman must face off against a box of demons a witch gifted her.
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How would you handle the price of your partner’s infidelity? What would you do if their STI prevented you from ever becoming a parent, and at the same time your partner has a child with your relative-in-law? My name is Keven Porter Jr, and in my low-budget feature “Unheard” this scenario is the origin of Stephanie Pickett’s nightmare. Out of revenge, she aids the death of her sister-in-law and niece, her husband’s love child. Years pass with a cover-up, but her brother Cole, mentally tortured, does not move on. With the help of a witch, he has a black box full of demons sent to her. After his death, the demons persist till Stephanie’s secrete is discovered, and her life teeters on the edge of death.
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Hi Keven, cool story idea! I think mentioning Detective Hernandez in the logline would make it stronger. I would also recommend hinting at or revealing with Stephanie's secret is. Spoiling certain parts of the story that make the script really interesting is sometimes necessary to get readers hooked.
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Thank you, everyone!
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