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THE MAGI
By Lois Buchter

GENRE: Action
LOGLINE:

What if the Three Wise Men never died and have been on earth all this time fighting against evil?

SYNOPSIS:

Main Characters: THE MAGI

Caspar – Queen of Persia, a Christian – She is the leader of the team, strongest, and the most humble. She hopes to one day earn her wings and become an angel. Earthquakes, change the flow of lava and the oceans.

Balthazar – King of Arabia, a Muslin – He is the protector of the group and can control the weather.

Melichor – King of India, a Hindu – He is reflective and has a gift of consciousness to humans. Married to Neva.

The Golem – An ancient creature from made from clay. Now wants to become more human, find love, if he can only control his inner rage.

Synopsis: A caravan of leaders find the Christ child upon his birth, and they are gifted with powers, longevity, and a mandate to help humanity. Over the centuries they have settled into a routine of helping at times of crisis, and now have come back together when an ancient Golem escapes and is on the path to find his own version of humanity.

Along the way, the Golem kidnaps a boy and demands a talisman necklace from The Magi which gives him increased powers. They chase him to Egypt, where he finds information about a female Golem in his increased awareness. He releases the child. With his incredible strength and becoming more human each day, he feels guilt for almost hurting the boy. The Golem begins to lash out against bad impulses in his new awareness.

Father Carmichael, a past recovering victim of the Golem, gets involved to help the team contain the situation as they look for the female Golem. The Magi arrange a meeting with the female, but it goes wrong and Father Carmichael destroys the female. Enraged, the Golem vows revenge against mankind and races to a hidden crypt to get more talisman for increased powers. The Magi get there before him and accidentally awaken the God RA.

The Golem breaks into the crypt where he is quickly eliminated by RA. As he dies, the Magi give him his greatest desire, a soul.

The big reveal at the end let’s know that God sent The Magi to not only rescue the boy, but to also rescue the Golem. That all life matters.

Tasha Lewis

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