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An avid astronomer and phd in Botany is applying for a job on the first maned mission to Mars but he must first give up his job as a marijuana salesman.
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It's a really good idea. If it were me I'd edit the dialogue a little bit by breaking it up here and there and I'd shorten the exposition. But those are just my choices. Use your own voice. There's a lot of potential here.