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SHE DID THIS TO ME

SHE DID THIS TO ME
By Quantieshia Brown

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:

After regaining control of his life, a domestic violence survivor is forced down memory lane when his abusive ex-girlfriend stalks him, and he must take drastic measures to protect himself.



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Derek C. Block

Quantieshia Brown, this is refreshing to see...a story from the man's perspective when it comes to domestic violence. Such stories need to be told to raise awareness. I think your logline is almost. Avoid the cliché "down memory lane" to make it stronger. Here is an example I threw together. Maybe it can spark some inspiration for you as you "workshop" the logline a bit: "After reestablishing a sense of normalcy to his life, a domestic violence survivor must take drastic measures to protect himself when his abusive ex-girlfriend returns, hoping to control him." Good luck on your project!

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