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BRENNA AND RILEY TAKE TO THE COURT (PILOT EPISODE: BRENNA AND RILEY AGAINST ALL ODDS)
By Michael Nguyen

GENRE: Sports, Drama
LOGLINE:

After hearing about a national tournament being held for members of their tennis club, two tennis players are trained by their coach to do whatever it takes to be selected to participate.

SYNOPSIS:

Brenna and Riley are two members of the Cahill Women's Tennis Club in Ireland. Brenna is seen as a peppy girl, while Riley is a tomboy. Their coach is retired tennis player Ciara, whom Brenna and Riley look up to and idolize. This episode introduces all of their friends and family, as well as other members of the club, including Brenna's family, who owns an Irish pub in which she is forced to become its next owner against her wishes, as well as Riley's single mother. When a national tournament is announced to all of the club members, Ciara notoriously trains them hard to find out who is better suited to compete. Brenna and Riley vow to compete against each other if ever possible, and become friendly rivals the moment they realize they are the only two chosen.

BRENNA AND RILEY TAKE TO THE COURT (PILOT EPISODE: BRENNA AND RILEY AGAINST ALL ODDS)

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Mista Martel

I like how this sets up a clear premise by introducing two tennis players who want to participate in a national tournament held for members of their tennis club. This creates a clear goal for the characters to work towards, which could be engaging for audiences.

Michael Nguyen

Mista Martel You should take a look at my series bible! The inspiration for this series came from a TV anime that I've only heard of because of its catchy theme song, and unfortunately I only saw one episode of, but that didn't stop me from putting this into fruition! Just like my two feature-length screenplays, I am anticipating looking for someone who might be able to help me produce my idea for a series like this one, as I feel like after so many years of trial and error, now is the right time for me to showcase my work to those interested in seeing it the way it was meant to.

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