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A SHUTTLE TO GO TO THE MOON
By Gabriel Bonilla

GENRE: Drama
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A 9-year-old boy overcomes his shyness by calling his mom's best friend, in a day that shook the United States and the World.

A SHUTTLE TO GO TO THE MOON

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Nathaniel Baker

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Julia Petrisor

Great logline! What about "overcomes" or "defeats" his shyness? and then "on the day" not "in a day" is clearer. Best of luck with it!

Gabriel Bonilla

Great suggestion, Julia Petrisor! At least the script got a great feedback from a course I attended to some friends.

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