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By Cornelius A. Melton

GENRE: Comedy, Action
LOGLINE: A angry black woman gives a crazy Jamaican "da business" after he abducts her daughter before her first day of school.


Mama Lu; an overly protective bossy biddy may soon see a dream come true; if her eighteen year-daughter Destiny, goes to College and graduates the Lawyer she wants her to be and gets them out the hood. And with her 'pride' and 'joy' already accepted into one of the State's most elite Universities, she can almost leave her worries behind. That is until her ex; the negro she loves to hate called Icy Slim, picks up Destiny and takes her to his favorite hangout to discuss her bright and promising future. Unfortunately she soon finds out that her sometimey and always two timing friend is involved in a little bit more than playin when a crazy Jamaican called Snow, pays them an unexpected visit along that thin line of, "Where's my shit!". Unable to meet the rastafarian's demand Icy Slim finds himself in deep dookie when Snow; madder than a fireant chewing on a rhinoceros's hot, chaffed ass, kidnapps Destiny and gives him until 8 o'clock p.m. to either come up with the loochie or kiss the dream goodbye. And to make matters worse, Icy Slim will have no choice but to tell Mama Lu that the love of her life has been abducted and it's all his fault. Deezam! But after Mama Lu puts da "beat down" on him she decides that the only way to get her daughter back is to unite forces with her ex. And as the clock ticks and the sun sets, they turn the city upside down and inside out to get her back. Can they do it?

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