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FAMILY VACATION
By Timothy Ford
A family of four embarks on the vacation of a lifetime- which turns into a trip of petty competition with a deranged family on this technology-free island.
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I disagree. I think this is an adequate Logline.
Although, I'd go with: "on a technology-free island"
Also, that budget size for a family comedy might deter selling it.
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Thank you Amazing Kacee
You are welcome - You can take two of the problems and leave the best one in as not to confuse the readers. It reminds me of the show LOST OR SURVIVOR So how is yours different?
It is very different from those shows and more of a fun vacation film. But the ending and competition has a lot of similarities with SURVIVOR. Amazing Kacee
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