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CLAN HIGH SKIRMISH
By Ian Buchanan
In a high school where the clan feuds of the Scottish Highlands never ended, warriors confront one another in an epic brawl.
CLAN HIGH SKIRMISH
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Lose "young Scottish (redundant) warriors" and replace with just "young warriors" and end at epic brawl. Lose ellipsis and "with kilts and swords" and this is a solid logline 4 or 5 stars.
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