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CLUBFIT-LESS
By Scott Marshall Taylor

GENRE: Comedy
LOGLINE:

Clubfit-less is everything you NEVER wanted your health club to be.

SYNOPSIS:

Clubfit-less is everything you NEVER wanted your health club to be.

And, it's getting worse.

Corporate pressure stick it to witless lower management, who then tries haplessly to stick it to their out-of-control, outlandish, but largely fun-loving personal training staff.

The pressure to compete with better gyms, to hit ridiculous sales numbers, to comply with insurance requirements and for these individual employees to try to live real lives with meager wages, make gym member needs mostly only humorous afterthoughts.

The trainer manager, Joanne del Caso, is trying and trying to get her training staff under some control, while her top-selling trainer, Jimmy G. is instead, skipping out all the time, trying to get his acting career started.... It was all falling apart long before another one of her top trainers suddenly dies, under suspicious circumstance, on the training floor - and Jimmy G

becomes a suspect.

Sheetal R Patel

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