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THE JUSTICE BUS

THE JUSTICE BUS
By Kamil Murat

GENRE: Crime, Drama
LOGLINE:

"Kafka meets 12 Angry Men". A rookie hitman misses the target and runs away by a bus. At the beginning it is ordinary trip but later hitman notices that the bus is court  and passengers are not happy with his unsuccessful assassination.

SYNOPSIS:

A rookie hitman (Bruce) misses the target and runs away by a bus since his partner driver doesn’t show up. At the beginning it is ordinary bus trip but later Bruce notices that passengers are familiar to each other and not happy with his presence on the bus. Bruce hears that they all wait a big shot called Name Taker.

When Name Taker (so called the judge) gets on the bus and tells that the employer (AKA Company) is not happy with Bruce’s unsuccessful attempt and reached a verdict of guilty but merciful Company granted a last chance to hear Bruce. Then the bus becomes a court. Bus Attendant acts as bailiff, passengers as court viewers and an attorney appointed by company with his secretary Eva who are already on the bus. Bruce finds the situation funny and rejects to defend himself but Diana (a passenger, nice girl sitting next to Bruce) convinces him to share his words. Bruce agrees when he feels that she is interested in him as much as him.

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