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LORD CHAMBERLAIN'S MEN

LORD CHAMBERLAIN'S MEN
By William Furst

GENRE: Action, Crime
LOGLINE: Mafia lord escape Assassination from drugs dealing with Brutal Cabals, pays with his life for the existence of his drug cartel and revenge begot deaths.

SYNOPSIS:

When you're cornered and no way out, you just have to find a way out, and when life hit you hard, you hit it back harder... Nickolas Smith is a MAFIA LORD (TRAIT) He establish a drug cartel business name Lord Chamberlain's Drug Cartel in Albuquerque New Mexico, His business flourish all over the country and he's been hated and monitored by Brutal Lords cabal, a fierce and hardened Mafias gangs... Lord Chamberlain Drug Cartel short in drugs Production (INCITING INCIDENT) and Nickolas Smith lookout to make deals with the number 1 leading drugs business owner in Colombia due to their high-tech in drugs dealings. Brutal Lords cabal see this as an opportunity to wipe out Chamberlain's Drug Cartel out of New Mexico out of jealousy and enviness,(OBSTACLES), The deal is set up in New Jersey United States between the two parties but Brutal Lords cabal invited the third party some professional Assassin's to wipe out all members of Chamberlain's Drug Cartel. Unfortunately Nickolas Smith escaped with his billion dollars money and the drugs. This makes LORD CHAMBERLAIN'S Drug cartel outshine and becomes number 1 drug dealer in New Mexico. Nickolas Smith later fake the death of his wife and only son for them to live, and surrender his life on a summer holiday in Alaska for the existence of his drug Cartel (STAKE). BUT IN THE FUTURE, REVENGE HAS IT WAY AND NEMESIS CAUGHT UP WITH BRUTAL LORDS CABALS GANGS.

Nathaniel Baker

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William Furst

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I'll make amendments on the grammar...

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