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After years of fortune and fame, Martin's time is up. But, when the Devil returns for the soul of the Hollywood star, he comes bearing a unique and unexpected offer that turns the night into a whirlwind of unrestrained debauchery, peril and literal soul searching that neither was expecting.
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In the glittering world of Hollywood excess, legendary producer Martin Sterling is on the brink of losing his soul when he reaches the pinnacle of success. But when the Devil offers an unexpected deal that promises a night of wild debauchery and soul-searching, Martin's life takes a thrilling and unpredictable turn.
As the Devil and Martin embark on a raucous adventure across LA, they find themselves pursued by Azazel, a ruthless demon hell-bent on seizing control of the underworld. Through a night of hilarious antics, perilous encounters, and unexpected revelations, Martin must confront his own demons and discover the true meaning of redemption.
In this darkly comedic and thought-provoking tale, 'A Night with the Devil' takes you on a wild ride through the excesses of Hollywood, where even the Devil himself learns that there's more to life than meets the eye. Buckle up for a devilishly good time!
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A tad too vague on what the night turns out to be. What's in store?
Brad, thanks! I've been rehashing it in my head. I'll work on it and have something new soon.
My take would be "let's switch places-- I'm bored of this job--did it for eons. For once I want to be a star -- be appreciated." But even without that take -- 5 stars.
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Rutger, that's been done before. But, it's kind of close.
... Great -- looks like your original!!
Thank you, everyone!! Still working on tone - really dark comedy or fantasy drama, so no synopsis yet (want to start that one out better).
look forward to reading this
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