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A recovering alcoholic returning to her home town, coincides with the reopening of a 14 year old case case, leaving her forced to face her demons.
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Hi Katie! Great start! Just needs a bit more specifics and also that first comma isn't needed. Try this formula out: When [INCITING INCIDENT OCCURS], a [SPECIFIC PROTAGONIST] must [OBJECTIVE],or else [STAKES].