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CRIMINAL BACHATA

CRIMINAL BACHATA
By Ugo Cavallo

GENRE: Romance, Musical
LOGLINE:

An old hitman compromises his mission before retiremen when he falls in love with a young and hot bachata dancer girl. 

SYNOPSIS:

Enrich cleans the silenced pistol, he has just killed yet another businessman who has played a trick on yet

another mafioso who does not let himself be fooled.Enrich is a real war machine, he kills anything for a

check. On the umpteenth mission, he has to go to Portugal and kill a blogger. It must be an easy mission,

walk into a club and wait. A 24-year-old mulatto girl starts dancing. Enrich looks at her, hours later I'm in

bed. Something goes wrong in Enrich's mind, he can only think of Alma, but he has a man to kill who has

just left ..

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Enrich collects the information to track him down in a hotel in Paris but his target is protected by the CIA

and as if that weren't enough, Alma just dumped him to go with someone else. Enrich can no longer see

and for a rash move is captured. In his darkest moment, only a thought gives him the strength to react and

become free, the thought of Alma. Once free he must find his target and eliminate it before it's too late.

Some clues lead him to a remote part of South America, there, among the shacks of a street busy with

small local pickpockets, is the hiding place of his target. Enrich waits for the night to break in but when he

enters he is paralyzed by what he finds, Marisa embraced her target, Enrich kills his target and then

remains speechless in front of Alma. That girl she lost her head for is now defenseless at her feet as Enrich's

9mm points straight into the back of her neck. In his eyes he still sees her dancing and his hands still feel

her hips sway but Enrich has to choose whether to be a professional killer or a retired one.

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Amazing Kacee

Good first try - but this is not a logline - Research online what a logline is - It must have an incident, a solution, and a hook. Good Luck!

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