what is their destiny? - Lots of unnecessary words - try tightening it up this might help you construct an awesome logline https://www.scriptreaderpro.com/script-logline/

Thank you Kacee. I don't remember if I rated your loglines but I found all of them interesting. I can't say what the destiny is here as it is revealed only on the last page, and each character has a different destiny depending on what he or she did during the story. But if you can think of a better way to phrase this, I'd be very interested to hear it.