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KEEPER OF THE WINDS
By Cara Rogers
A young boy works to create a man-powered flying machine to win prize money that will allow his family to fly above the devastation of the 1930s Dustbowl.
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Hi Cara, my suggestion is to simply eliminate "works to" in your logline to make it tighter. "A young boy creates a man-powered flying machine to win prize money..." Sounds like an interesting story!
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Joey O'Connor probably giving away spoilers but he tries and tries but isn't exactly successful. So maybe misleading?
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Sounds like a good story of perserverance. Anything about flying and I'm in. :)