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Could I get some more detail on the camp he's yearning to escape? Is the young boy a fighter or defiant?
The title is a reference to Bohemian Rhapsody, I assume.
Young boy is his name? Or is he a young boy?
What sort of camp? Summer camp? Auschwitz?
Pave his own path how? Is it a Space camp, but he'd rather be at Theatre camp?
Denied in what way? Like gatekept?
Including himself - as in he is in self-denial?
This needs an entire do-over.
Thank you for the feedback, but this is a logline, which is a one sentence summary of the script.
Could I get some more detail on the camp he's yearning to escape? Is the young boy a fighter or defiant?
The title is a reference to Bohemian Rhapsody, I assume.
Young boy is his name? Or is he a young boy?
What sort of camp? Summer camp? Auschwitz?
Pave his own path how? Is it a Space camp, but he'd rather be at Theatre camp?
Denied in what way? Like gatekept?
Including himself - as in he is in self-denial?
This needs an entire do-over.
Thank you for the feedback, but this is a logline, which is a one sentence summary of the script.