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SUGAR IS MAGIC
By David Bass

GENRE: Comedy
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A neurodivergent YouTube chef drives from Myrtle Beach to Manhattan, with his cat, to boost his career on a TV baking competition.

Maurice Vaughan

Sounds like this is gonna be funny, David Bass! :D I think you need to add an inciting incident and the stakes to the logline. Here's a logline suggestion: “After ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a young chef with autism and OCD germaphobia drives from Myrtle Beach to Manhattan, with his cat, to boost his career on a TV cooking competition so ________ (stakes).”

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