hello, nice to greet you.

I have made a LOGLINE and SYNOPSIS of a script I made, and I would like to receive a feedback to continue learning. But I haven't got many visits or views.

Can you tell me how to increase the number of posts in my logline to get returns and constructive criticism?

Thank you very much

I'd structure this logline more like this: (Feigning immortality, a lonely vampire seeks to live the life of an everyman but is accosted at every turn by an organization geared in the extermination of his race.)

This logline leaves me with a lot of questions. Is he the last vampire? Is the organization only hunting him? Can't he just sire more vampires or is he currently going through a crisis of conscience? Not trying to criticize, I'm just trying to understand the mythos.

Thank you for your feedback, Frank. All the details are in the script. Why would he produce new vampires? He wants to be an ordinary person and no longer wants to wreak havoc

No problem, Nadir. Take it all with a grain of salt, or a clove of garlic in your case. Lol. I just wanted to give you a fair shake before I rated your logline. I'm just not in the habit of giving out 3-star reviews without explaining my reasoning.

Thanks Frank!