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THE APOSTATE
By Nadir Akhmerov
The head of the security service works for a crazy, cruel, criminal boss. Fearing for his family, the head of the security service begins to cooperate with FBI agents to eliminate the criminal boss.
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Thank you for your assessment, Tasha.
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Already sounds like a film I would watch! I would recommend streamlining the logline into one flowing sentence. And if the axe is his signature weapon, I can't wait to see it in action.
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Thank you, Steven! I'll figure out how to simplify it.
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