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THE ROAD OF LIFE: PART TWO

THE ROAD OF LIFE: PART TWO
By Nadir Akhmerov

GENRE: Action, Thriller
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In the sequel, the main character, who strayed from the group with his dog, continues a dangerous journey to the colony of survivors to deliver a cure for the virus.

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After the events of the first part, Stephen and the dog Sarah, separated from the other team members due to the confrontation with cannibals and ghouls, continue their journey together to the Valley of Peace to deliver a vaccine against the virus. Stephen also believes that his wife is alive and is in the Valley of Peace.

After walking kilometers of roads through the forest, Stephen and Sarah get into trouble again. They encounter a pack of ghouls and become enemies of cruel bandits, who are commanded by a murderer and rapist named Bill. Stephen gets into a fight with Bill's brother and kills him. Then Stephen and Sarah miraculously escape from persecution. They stumble upon a gas station, find a pickup truck, and then run away in it from a pack of ghouls.

It's raining. Meanwhile, Zoe is at Brandon's camp. Brandon's camp is a secluded place. The people that Brandon once saved live here peacefully. They have Harvey, a former member of a gang of cannibals, in captivity.

One of Brandon's team, a guy named Dustin, while in the forest, notices that a huge horde of zombies is heading in their direction. After that, Brandon decides to leave the camp and go with all his people to the Valley of Peace, but no one knows where this place is. But Harvey informs Brandon that he knows where the Valley of Peace is. Believing Harvey, Brandon gives the command to all his people to pack all their things, and they leave.

One of the main antagonists of the first part, Miranda, tries to survive alone. After reading the touching words in the diary of her deceased brother, she thinks about her life. She meets a family, a man named Henry, his wife Rachel and their son Isaac. She saves them from bandits, and they decide to go to the Valley of Peace together. While spending the night in the woods, they come across Brandon's people. Among them, Zoe recognizes her old abuser and orders Miranda to be captured, after which they continue their journey.

Stephen and Sarah are driving along the highway in the woods in a pickup truck. Then the chase begins. Bill and his bandits found them. After a long chase, the pickup truck pulls off the road into the forest. Several of Bill's men continue to chase Stephen in cars. Bill himself remains waiting on the road. Bill's men are killed during the chase, but Stephen is also not without losses. During the fight with the bandits, the dog Sarah heroically dies.

Stephen is grieving from the loss, but, having gathered his strength, he loads his weapon and goes to take revenge on his abusers.

It's raining again. Meanwhile, Brandon and all his men stop for the night in the forest. During a rest stop, Brandon almost kills Miranda out of revenge, but Zoe convinces him not to kill her.

The next morning, while scouting, Dustin and Harvey are attacked by an infected bear. Dustin is killed by the monster's paws and jaws, but in the end Brandon and his men come running and then save Harvey.

Almost immediately after this incident, the inhabitants of Brandon are attacked by a horde of ghouls. People with weapons in their hands shoot back, the rest run away in a panic into the forest . Most people are killed by ghouls. Miranda again saves Henry and his family, but fails, she is bitten by a zombie on the neck.

The attack was repulsed. Brandon is grieving for the people who died. Only Zoe, Harvey, Miranda, Henry and his family survived. But the battle is not over yet. The second wave of ghouls is approaching. All the survivors escape into the forest.

Meanwhile, Stephen finds the cave of his enemies and, like RAMBO, brutally deals with the bandits. Stephen also kills Bill.

Having dealt with the enemies, Stephen continues his journey alone. He goes down the hill, but suddenly the ground under his feet shakes, and a LANDSLIDE occurs. The earth is burying Stephen.

At the same time, Miranda is convinced that she can no longer escape, since she was bitten in the neck, and she decides to sacrifice herself so that others can escape from the zombies. Miranda takes a bunch of grenades and Brandon, and then leaves.

While the others are running away, an exhausted Miranda kneels down and starts screaming at the top of her voice, attracting a horde of ghouls to her.

The ghouls attack her, and the grenades explode, tearing the monsters to pieces.

Stephen with great difficulty gets out of the ground. He is in despair, but suddenly remembers Adam's motivational words, gets up and continues on his way.

Brandon and Harvey find a minibus, then Henry, his family and Zoe get into the car and drive away.

Stephen finds an abandoned camp where he saves two little girls from zombies, but then stumbles upon other survivors, among whom the leader of the survivors is a woman named Andrea.

The minibus, in which Brandon and his people are, crashes into a jeep hummer, then armed men in uniform come out of the forest. Among them is a man named Lionel. He informs Brandon that they are from a private organization called Bright Ray. These soldiers then take Brandon, Harvey, Zoe and Henry and their family to their base.

Stephen arrives at Andrea's camp, where he informs her that he must deliver a vaccine against the virus to the Valley of Peace. Andrea is surprised by this news, then gives him her horse and sends her man on the road with him.

Stephen and Andrea's man named Carl are climbing a mountain. Now Stephen, full of hope, is completely confident that he will complete the task, and they will continue on their way.

Continued in the next part.

THE ROAD OF LIFE: PART TWO

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Emilia Morgan

It is felt that the first part was supposed to warm up interest. In the second part, there are more actions and locations. A good sequel.

Nadir Akhmerov

Thank you again, Emilia. That was the plan

Steven Blows

I would rework the opening of this logline as it assumes the reader knows certain information, rather than telling us this nofrmation. For example the phrase "the team". If I have not read your Part 1 logline I would be asking "What team?". A sequal advertises the original as much as itself.

Nadir Akhmerov

That's the whole point, Steven. You will not start watching the series from the second season, because you will not understand what is happening here. That's why I created an intrigue. The reader will read the logline of the second part and ask the question-What kind of command is this? And what was in the first part? I need to read this.

Nadir Akhmerov

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Woodrow Wilkins

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Richard Buzzell

Part Two - A re-play of Part One.

Nadir Akhmerov

What are you talking about, Richard? Have you read the script or at least the synopsis?

Emilia Morgan

Mr. Buzzell. I want to ask you. Did the author of this trilogy offend you in some way? I just don't understand where you noticed the repetition of the first part? The same can be said about "The Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers". If, of course, to judge by your incomprehensible logic to me.

Richard Buzzell

Hey Emilia - Odd how the style of your writing resembles Nadir's even though you're African-American. Are you deliberately trying to sound as though English is a second language for you?

Emilia Morgan

You're a strange man, Richard.

Jon Navarro

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Jon Navarro

Giving me "I am Legend" vibes, and not in a good way. The treatment is thorough, so great job there. But your log line is lacking. It assumes I've read part 1 of this series and as a producer feels lazy. It undercuts all the good work you invested in your treatment. I would love to read a proper log line, and how your story distinguishes itself from Richard Matheson's novel?

Nadir Akhmerov

In Richard Matheson's novel, the main character named Robert Neville drinks alcohol for half of the book, then gets drunk with alcohol to such an extent that he almost died on the verge and realized that something needs to change in life. For the next 40% of the book, he repairs the house and studies the virus. In my trilogy, the main characters are engaged in saving humanity, namely, delivering a ready-made vaccine to a colony of survivors.But the first attempt was unsuccessful, but one of the heroes does not give up and, having separated from the group after a collision with cannibals, continues his journey with his dog to deliver the vaccine to the colony of survivors. In parallel, the secondary heroes are trying to survive and are also trying to get to the colony of survivors.

Nadir Akhmerov

There are many such differences. I can talk about it for a long time. Probably, you were just confused by a poster resembling the novel "I am a legend", and I had to change it :)

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Victor Azolike

Keep up the good work, Nadir. Loved the first part and the second. Good work!

Nadir Akhmerov

Thank you very much, Victor!

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