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HOT DOG HARRY
By Michael Vernon
A patriotic story detailing the 1983 bombing of the US Marines barracks during the Lebanese Civil War from the perspective of a Jewish American hot dog vendor.
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Proposed rewrite:
"The 1983 bombing of the U.S. Marines barracks during the Lebanese Civil War is told from the perspective of a [add a compelling adjective] Jewish-American hot dog vendor."
Is there a finished draft? I would read this! -Nik
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