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DARK GREY

DARK GREY
By Paskael Tyiska

GENRE: Sci-fi, Action
LOGLINE: The Butterfly Effect of our human condition is causing mass extinction of extraterrestrial life in the Universe. A Grey alien discovers an ancient secret and the way to his salvation on earth. " BEWARE of Visitors with Technology".
Pattana Thaivanich

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Frank Baruch

Trippy premise, Paskael! Totally reminds me of The Martian Chronicles.

I'd love to rate this a 5, but I'd like to know a little more about the synopsis and the basic plot. For instance, why the Grey Alien is on earth (was it sent to save its planet, or did the war lead it to earth? Was the war fought on earth?) what are the Grey Alien's traits and/or weaknesses (Is it sympathetic? Empathetic? Hostile?) and what is the main goal (to save its home planet? The universe? Humankind?) Very cool concept!

Paskael Tyiska

Frank, we trace the last Grey origin to ancient Egypt and find the alien was born through a human host on earth. The retrospective story is told through the eyes of the most decorated General in the United States Military ( A Grey) . This is his story of how and why he took over planet earth and weaponized the human consciousness. One absolute purpose is to hide and control the human population. "BEWARE OF STRANGERS WITH TECHNOLOGY "

Frank Baruch

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Frank Baruch

Paskael Tyiska Ohhhh! Neat! Awesome concept, Paskael! That totally works in the context of your logline. I hope you have good luck with this.

Paskael Tyiska

Thank you Frank Baruch! You will see it streaming soon.

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