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FLIP
By Joshua Levi
GENRE:
Sci-Fi, Comedy Drama
LOGLINE:
Two friends accept a mysterious parcel that drags them on an adventure full of supernatural powers, evil corporations and alternate realities, as they attempt to save their world from an approaching extinction level event.
Sub-genres: Mystery/Adventure/Crime/Thriller
Potential: Feature script(s) and/or a series (TV or web)
FLIP
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Sounds like an exciting story, Joshua Levi. What's happening to the world that the friends must "change the fate of their world"? I think that would make the stakes/logline clearer.
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I hear ya!
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Love the concept, but it could be more specific. I'm not sure of the tone or age or values/needs of the characters. A few more details to clue us in and this will pop a lot more I think.