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A library aide overhears two criminals discussing their hidden stash of cash and decides to steal her way to a better life. The heist sets off a deadly chain reaction making her the target of two bank robbers, a dirty cop, and a mob hit man.
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The story is about a small-town girl named Sara who has dreams of being a famous makeup artist; but as a lowly library aide, can’t even pay her bills. As her dreams fade and with no financial relief in sight, Sara decides to steal her way to a better life. But what she doesn’t know is the money belongs to two, bank robbing brothers who owe the money to the mob. The brothers are now a target and the detective assigned to the bank robbery case needs the money to pay his disgruntled bookie. Sara refuses to give it up and they all pursue her in a dangerous game of cat and mouse. Now, she must use her skills as a makeup artist to hide in plain sight.
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