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Available Executives for Family

Credits include:

SURVIVOR, BATTLEGROUND: RHINO WARS, SARAH PALIN'S ALASKA

Maria Baltazzi

Emmy Award-Winning Executive Producer

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Lauren Black

Producer/Partner, Chair 10 Productions

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Rufus Chaffee

Head of Development, Goldilocks Productions

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Olivia Cohen

Junior Literary Manager, Aspire Talent Management

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Credits include:

UNDERWORLD 2&3, DEADPOOL 1&2, FIFTY SHADES OF GREY 2&3, THE AGE OF ADELINE.

Michael Collins

Creative Producer, 3Fifty Films / Calypso35 Films

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Marina Deak

Creative Executive, Amazon Studios

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Credits include:

FLYING IN THE DARK

Annika Horne

Acquisitions and Development Coordinator, Samuel Goldwyn Films

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Credits include:

American Wedding, Curious George, The Good Shepherd, The Fast & The Furious 3, Seabiscuit, Red Dragon

Regina Lee

Producer - HBO, Fox, Starz, CBS

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Helene Nash

Producer and Development Executive

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Credits include:

GHOSTBUSTERS: AFTERLIFE, SPIDER-MAN: NO WAY HOME, THE MITCHELLS VS. THE MACHINES, and CINDERELLA.

O.Z.

Creative Development, Office of the Vice President, Columbia Pictures

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Credits include:

The Lion King, The Haunted Mansion, Forbidden Kingdom, Mr. Peabody and Sherman

Jonny Perl

Associate Producer, Cinemation

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Credits include:

RESPECT, CANDYMAN, HOUSE OF GUCCI, NO TIME TO DIE

Pauline S.

Coordinator, Motion Picture Division

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Credits include:

PRETTY LITTLE LIARS with Roberto Aguierre Sacasa, DOOM PATROL and TITANS

Ashlie Sapiro

Manager, Drama Development, HBOMax

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Credits include:

MR. RIGHT, THE CALL, THE ROAD WITHIN, CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH FOR, FEAR INC.

Nat Topping

Creative Executive, Amasia Entertainment

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Apryll White

Development Coordinator, Black Monarch Entertainment

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Brad Wilson

Producer/Co-Founder, Higher Purpose Entertainment

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Available Executives for Faith

Credits include:

SURVIVOR, BATTLEGROUND: RHINO WARS, SARAH PALIN'S ALASKA

Maria Baltazzi

Emmy Award-Winning Executive Producer

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Rufus Chaffee

Head of Development, Goldilocks Productions

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Credits include:

UNDERWORLD 2&3, DEADPOOL 1&2, FIFTY SHADES OF GREY 2&3, THE AGE OF ADELINE.

Michael Collins

Creative Producer, 3Fifty Films / Calypso35 Films

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Apryll White

Development Coordinator, Black Monarch Entertainment

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Brad Wilson

Producer/Co-Founder, Higher Purpose Entertainment

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Credits include:

The Great Wall & Beyond, In Tune, The Steve & Kathy Show, 3 Blind Saints, Cry Purple, This is Revival Prayer

Laura Woodworth

Development Executive, Source Entertainment/Cooke Media Group

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Y.W.

Talent Agent, Creative Artists Agency

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Katie Z.

Office of Senior Partner, Artists First

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Available Executives for For Actors

Credits include:

Benefit of the Doubt

Jonathan Heap

Oscar-Nominated Director, Gathering Productions

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Credits include:

The Merchant of Venice, Stander, The Breed, Two Jacks, Born of War, The Ninth Cloud, Riding the Bullet, The Least Among You

Julia Verdin

Producer & Manager, Rough Diamond Productions & Management

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Y.W.

Talent Agent, Creative Artists Agency

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Available Executives for For-Filmmakers

Credits include:

Berlin, I Love You, World War Z, 360, Chatroom, Rush,

Ewan Dunbar

Development, Sales, Acquisitions, Disrupting Influence (UK-based)

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Credits include:

Security, Desolation, Hunt to Kill, Viral

David Harris

Producer, Harris Films (Millennium Films Deal)

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Credits include:

Benefit of the Doubt

Jonathan Heap

Oscar-Nominated Director, Gathering Productions

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Credits include:

Flight, The Help, The Best Exotic Marigold Hotel, Contagion

Jason Mirch

Producer & Director of Script Services, Stage 32

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First 10 Pages Review

You Need to Nail Your Opening

Which of these best describes you?

- You have just started writing your next script. You want to make sure that you're on the right track before going any further. You know that before you invest the time and energy into writing the full script, you want to make sure the first 10 pages are working - and you are ready to proceed. It is time to get detailed Creative notes from an Industry Professional who has made a career in developing, producing, or selling Feature Films and Television Series.

- Your script is ready for the market. You know that the first 10 pages are the most critical in attracting a manager, producer, executive, or other industry professional. You will get honest feedback about whether your opening pages are enough to hook the reader.

- You are ready for Representation. You have more than one project that is ready for sale. You need the guidance of a Literary Manager to move your projects into the market and discuss all of your career goals and options for getting where you want to be. Use your opening pages to prove to any representative that you know how to capture - and keep - a reader's attention.

It is a competitive market. Even the best scripts need a plan to sell.

Do what produced writers have done - invest in developing your strategy with a pro.

How Can Stage 32 Help You?

With these development notes, the industry executive of your choice will read the first 10 pages of your feature script or TV pilot. Then, they’ll send you notes with thorough feedback in 6 major categories and concrete suggestions for improvement with detailed comments.

What Our Writers are Saying:

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Being new to Stage32 at this writing, I was dubious as to what kind of feedback I would receive on my script. I couldn't have been more pleased. First, the response was earlier than promised. Second, the feedback was constructive insightful and very encouraging.

- Michael Wenig

What You Actually Receive:

a Scorecard rating 6 major elements of your first 10 pages: your first scene, the set up of your characters, the set up of the world, clarity of the tone, originality of concept, & strength of voice.
a Pass/Consider/Recommend on the project
a Pass/Consider/Recommend for the writer
plus overall feedback and notes

What You Submit:

Your script!

Who’s Your Reader?

You get to choose from our roster of managers, producers and development execs
BONUS: you have the ability to choose your reader based on genre
OTHER BONUS: executives occasionally request to read through to the end of these scripts, and many have requested meetings with these writers.

This Coverage is For You If:

You’re working out a new script or concept.
You want to make sure that your inciting incident is strong enough.
You have doubts about your protagonist being compelling enough.
You’ve gotten negative feedback on your opening/first act and aren’t sure why.

If You’d Like More of Your Piece Read:

We’ve got options for that, and our Premium Development Notes is a great one.

And!

Make sure to send your whole script, because your exec may choose to read past page 10! If they do, they’ll provide you with additional script feedback at no additional cost!

Click Here to see an example of our First Ten Pages feedback card!

PLEASE NOTE: By booking an order for coverage or consulting with an executive, you agree to submit your script within 24 hours. Due to the professional commitments of our executives, their availability changes frequently. Failure to submit your script in a timely manner may cause your order to be delayed far beyond the estimated timeframe - or go unfulfilled.

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Available Executives for For Actors

Available Executives for For-Filmmakers

First 10 Pages Review

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Who’s Your Reader?

This Coverage is For You If:

If You’d Like More of Your Piece Read:

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