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First 10 Pages Review

You Need to Nail Your Opening

Any writer will tell you that the First 10 Pages of your screenplay are the most important. Executives spend a lot of time reading screenplays, and if they’re not hooked within the First 10 Pages (or less) they’ll put your piece to the side and move onto the next script. We’re here to make sure that you nail your First 10 Pages and keep that executive reading!

In choosing this service, we’ll help you write a powerful opening to your story that serves as a rock solid foundation for your entire script, and commands the attention of your audience.

What Is It?

With these development notes, the industry executive of your choice will read the first 10 pages of your feature script or TV pilot. Then, they’ll send you notes with thorough feedback in 6 major categories and concrete suggestions for improvement with detailed comments.

What Our Writers are Saying:

I opted for a "First 10 Page Review" & I could not be happier. I got a [First 10 Review] with Ms. Carla Westlund from Cake-studios & her feedback was outstanding. I'm pleased to say I received a "Consider," & by doing so, Ms. Westlund has renewed my fever to see my story on screen.

- Abdur Mohammed

I've had nothing but a positive experience with Stage 32 script services, the feedback, analysis and suggestions from plot errors to character arc and development have been extremely helpful.

- Drew Warren Delaine

Being new to Stage32 at this writing, I was dubious as to what kind of feedback I would receive on my script. I couldn't have been more pleased. First, the response was earlier than promised. Second, the feedback was constructive insightful and very encouraging.

- Michael Wenig

What You Actually Receive:

a Scorecard rating 6 major elements of your first 10 pages: your first scene, the set up of your characters, the set up of the world, clarity of the tone, originality of concept, & strength of voice.
a Pass/Consider/Recommend on the project
a Pass/Consider/Recommend for the writer
plus overall feedback and notes

What You Submit:

Your script!

Who’s Your Reader?

You get to choose from our roster of managers, producers and development execs
BONUS: you have the ability to choose your reader based on genre
OTHER BONUS: executives occasionally request to read through to the end of these scripts, and many have requested meetings with these writers.

This Coverage is For You If:

You’re working out a new script or concept.
You want to make sure that your inciting incident is strong enough.
You have doubts about your protagonist being compelling enough.
You’ve gotten negative feedback on your opening/first act and aren’t sure why.

If You’d Like More of Your Piece Read:

We’ve got options for that, and our Premium Development Notes is a great one.

And!

Make sure to send your whole script, because your exec may choose to read past page 10! If they do, they’ll provide you with additional script feedback at no additional cost!

Click Here to see an example of our First Ten Pages feedback card!

PLEASE NOTE: By booking an order for coverage or consulting with an executive, you agree to submit your script within 24 hours. Due to the professional commitments of our executives, their availability changes frequently. Failure to submit your script in a timely manner may cause your order to be delayed far beyond the estimated timeframe - or go unfulfilled.