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The executive of your choice will read the first ten pages of your pilot for feedback and consideration.
The industry executive of your choice will read the first ten pages of your television pilot and provide feedback and concrete suggestions for improvement. If the executive is compelled to continue reading after page 10, they will read your entire script PLUS give you a script read scorecard. Your pilot script is being read for feedback from your chosen executive. The executive will read and respond to your script as if it were a professional submission to their company.
• Scorecard rating 6 script elements of your first 10 pages: First Scene, Set up of Characters, Set up of World, Clarity of Tone, Originality of Concept, Strength of Voice.
• Pass/consider/recommend – Project
• Pass/consider/recommend – Writer
• Overall feedback / notes
Your entire pilot script
• Development executive, manager, agent, producer that YOU choose (options below)
• Ability to choose reader based on genre
• You are working out a new pilot or concept.
• You are about to embark on a rewrite.
• You have received negative feedback on your opening.
• You’re querying agents, managers, producers, and you want to know if your opening will grab them and get them to keep reading.
If the executive is compelled to continue reading after page 10, they will read beyond the first 10 pages of your pilot at no extra charge and give you an additional script read scorecard. That scorecard will have ratings on 6 crucial script elements (Formatting, Concept/Originality, Characterization/Dialogue, Structure/Pacing/Plot, Budget Range & Commercial Prospects), pass/consider/recommend ratings, & executive feedback. Occasionally, executives who read through to the end of these scripts have requested meetings with the writer.
Click Here to see an example of our First Ten Pages feedback card!