9/5/18 On Monologues - Hidden Figures, Taken, Breaking Bad, Wolf of Wall Street

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Allen James Roughton is the Stage 32 Script Services Coordinator, a screenwriter, reader and development researcher who has consulted on over 100 projects, scripts, books, comics and films and conducted research on life stories, exposés, professions and locations for development at major production companies. Full Bio »

Webinar Summary

Can you use long dialogue blocks effectively? Sure you can! We'll break down the rousing sales rally in THE WOLF OF WALL STREET, the chilling call in TAKEN, the desperate video message in "Breaking Bad", and the moving speech from HIDDEN FIGURES.


What You'll Learn

You can find the scripts reviewed in this webcast below:
TAKEN (via Simply Scripts)
"Breaking Bad" (via Film School Rejects)

About Your Instructor

Allen James Roughton is the Stage 32 Script Services Coordinator, a screenwriter, reader and development researcher who has consulted on over 100 projects, scripts, books, comics and films and conducted research on life stories, exposés, professions and locations for development at major production companies.


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Reviews Average Rating: 5 out of 5

  • So fun. Loved seeing the text scrolling along with the movie. Really great experience seeing how to pick apart and talk about screenplays in constructive, helpful ways. Cool to focus on monologues, but different types of monologues in different formats, and writer's intentional choices, the 'tool kit' we can employ when crafting powerful dialogues on the page. GREAT experience.
  • This was a fantastic webinar. Learned a lot and enjoyed every minute of it. Thank you, Allen.

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