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By Kevin Johnson

GENRE: Comedy
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A middle aged man struggles to take care of his blended, interracial family while living in a racist neighborhood with very little support from his wife who's children and family hate him. 

Kinney Scott

sounds logical try adding it to blackmaverickmovies on youtube

Kinney Scott

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Kevin Johnson

Thanks Kinney. I will for sure look into that.

Kevin Johnson

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Kinney Scott

Aight they have nothing but independant films from famous to non famous people look up the agency for black maverickmovies and films good luck Kevin (: your film will be right on target with the rest of the movies (:

Kinney Scott

Im send a movie to this page look out for it that way you see were you stand at ..

Kevin Johnson

I sure will. I will definitely take a look at it and support.

Kinney Scott

just posted a movie its production site is classA entertsinmnet movie i posted is Family Secrets and Lies maverick films is the co production team..

Kinney Scott

entertainment was typo //

Kevin Johnson

Ok I will check it out. Thanks!!

Kinney Scott

(:

Tasha Lewis

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Angela Cristantello

This is great, Kevin! I think that it would likely be more impactful and illustrate bigger stakes to say "a middle aged man STRUGGLES to take care of his blended, interracial family...".

Also, why do his wife's children and extended family hate him? Is it because they're a blended family and he's stepping into the shoes that someone else was in previously? Is it because they're as racist as the rest of the neighborhood?

So much good stuff here, though!

Kevin Johnson

HI Angela Cristantello The kids and family want her to be with her ex boyfriend who treated her like crap. The kids just want their mom to be with their dad and the family like him because he been around for so long. Thank you so much for the feedback. I needed that.

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Tony Ray

Sounds really good, but I imagine it might work better as a drama more than a comedy. Regardless, this sounds like the kind of story people need these days.

Kevin Johnson

Tony Ray Thank Tony. Its about my life. My home life is a joke...LOL

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E. M. Watson

Nice, Kevin!

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Robin Gregory

Kevin Johnson I LOVE the title!

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