"Always Be Closing" How To Write a Killer Final 10-15 Pages

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Class hosted by: John Shepherd

Cross Creek Pictures

John Shepherd is a WGA Award-nominated writer for his work on the Emmy Award-winning Showtime television series Nurse Jackie. He comes to Cross Creek Pictures as the Director of Development after also working in development for Spelling Films, Polygram, and as a story analyst for the William Morris Agency. Mr. Shepherd has a BA in Broadcasting & Cinema from the University of North Carolina at Greensboro, and received an MFA in Screenwriting from the American Film Institute. Production company credits include Rush, Black Swan, The Woman in Black and The Ides of March. Full Bio »

Part 1 - The Beginning / Character

John gives a brief overview of what he looks for in a good story or screenplay. He then covers opening scenes, scene structure itself, “opposites,” what to include in your opening as it relates to your ending, and the overall creation of a strong, unique, memorable character.

Part 2 - Building the Bridge to Act III

John discusses the key second act into third act turn where your characters will face their greatest fear or weakness and how it will springboard them into a compelling ending. John explores these turns in various genres from rom-coms to horror. He also covers the topic of “ups and downs, positives and negatives”.

Part 3 - The Chase, The Twist, The Reveal... The “Second Ending”

John goes over key elements of powerful endings including chase scenes in various genres, twists and reveals, “second endings” and cliched scenes or details that should be avoided.

Part 4 - Final Scenes, Kickers & Sequels

The last part of this class deals with bringing all the various elements together to make a third act sing. John also covers kickers, page count and whether or not to hint at a sequel.


Summary:

4 part class taught by WGA Award-nominated writer John Shepherd, Director of Development at Cross Creek Pictures. AVAILABLE ON DEMAND!

The first 10 pages and the last 10 pages of a script are the most important. Making an executive walk away from a read of your script with a powerful impression is crucial to getting your script made. The last pages of a script come with their own web of problems (how to tie everything together, how to complete a character's arc, how to create a powerful final image, etc.). Sometimes a time crunched executive will read the first and last 10 pages of a script before deciding to read the whole thing. A writer has to make sure that they "stick the landing."

Stage 32 Happy Writers is excited to bring you the previously-recorded 4 part class: “Always Be Closing” - How to Write a Killer Final 10 Pages taught by John Shepherd, Director of Development at Cross Creek Pictures (Black Swan, The Woman In Black, Ides of March). Learn how to make your last act resonate for your characters, your audience, yourself and the executive reading it.

Purchasing gives you access to the previously-recorded live class.
Although John is no longer reviewing the assignments, we still encourage all listeners to participate!


About Your Instructor:

John Shepherd is a WGA Award-nominated writer for his work on the Emmy Award-winning Showtime television series Nurse Jackie. He comes to Cross Creek Pictures as the Director of Development after also working in development for Spelling Films, Polygram, and as a story analyst for the William Morris Agency. Mr. Shepherd has a BA in Broadcasting & Cinema from the University of North Carolina at Greensboro, and received an MFA in Screenwriting from the American Film Institute. Production company credits include Rush, Black Swan, The Woman in Black and The Ides of March.


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