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I am submitting to Glasshouse Distribution and Trick Candle Productions ("Company") herewith and under the terms and conditions stated herein the following material (hereinafter referred to as the "Material"), which Material is summarized below and submitted with this letter agreement (the "Release").

1. I acknowledge that because of Company's position in the entertainment industry Company receives numerous solicited and unsolicited submissions of ideas, formats, concepts, stories, teleplays, screenplays, bibles, suggestions and the like, and that many such submissions heretofore or hereafter received by Company are similar to or identical to those developed by Company or Company's employees or to those otherwise available to Company. Further, I acknowledge that Company has adopted the policy, with respect to unsolicited material that it must be submitted with a signed agreement in form substantially the same as this. In consideration of Company's receipt of the Material, I hereby agree to execute this Release. I acknowledge that Company has no obligations to me except as set forth in this Release, and that no other obligations exist or shall exist or shall be deemed to exist.
2. Company acknowledges that this Release covers and governs any and all of the Material, whether first submitted to Company contemporaneously with, or prior to, or following, the execution of this Release, and applies also to any submission of the Material made to Company by another source, directly or indirectly, by or through me.
3. I represent and warrant that I am the sole owner and author of the Material; that I have full right to submit it to Company upon the terms and conditions stated herein; and that the consent of no other person or entity is required to full exploit the Material. I will indemnify Company from and against all loss, liability, damage and expense (including attorneys' fees) incurred by Company at any time, in connection with the Material or any use thereof, or arising from any breach or alleged breach of these representations and warranties.
4. I acknowledge that the Material is submitted by me voluntarily and not in confidence, and that no confidential or fiduciary relationship is intended or created between us by reason of the submission of the Material or by reason of this Release. I further acknowledge that at this time Company has no intent to compensate me in any way and I have no expectation of receiving any compensation. I acknowledge that Company is under no obligation to review or use the Material or to negotiate with me with respect to the Material in any manner. Company and I have not yet reached an agreement concerning the use of the Material and I realize that no obligation of any kind is assumed by, or may be implied against, Company unless and until a formal written contract has been entered into between Company and me, and then the obligation shall be only as is expressed in the formal written Submission Release 2 contract. I agree that nothing contained in this Release nor the fact of my submission of the Material to Company shall be deemed to place Company in a position different from that of, or to cause Company to have any fewer rights than, a member of the general public to whom I have not submitted the Material.
5. I acknowledge that materials (or portions thereof) developed, created, acquired, licensed or otherwise obtained by Company, or third party materials to which Company have had access, may be similar or identical to the Material (or portions thereof) in theme, idea, plot, format and/or other respects. I agree that I will not be entitled to any compensation because of the use of any such similar or identical material. I cannot and will not assume or infer from the fact that Company will accept my offer to submit my Material to Company, that Company regards my Material, or any part thereof, as novel, valuable or usable. I recognize that other persons including Company employees may have submitted to Company or to others or made public, or may hereafter originate and submit or make public, similar or identical material which company shall have the right to use, and I understand that I will not be entitled to any compensation because of Company's use of such other similar or identical material. Subject to the foregoing provisions, Company will not make any use of any legally protectable portion of my Material unless Company and I have agreed in a writing signed by both parties concerning my compensation for such use, which compensation shall in no event be greater than the compensation normally paid by Company for similar Material from comparable sources.
6. This Release, regardless of where executed or performed, shall be governed by, construed and enforced in accordance with the laws of the State of California applicable to agreements executed and to be wholly performed therein. Each party hereby waives any and all rights and benefits which he, she or it might otherwise have or be entitled to under the laws of California to litigate any such dispute in court, it being the intention of the parties to arbitrate, according to the provisions hereof, all such disputes, as the sole and exclusive means to resolve any such disputes. Any such dispute may be submitted to arbitration in the County of Los Angeles, State of California, in accordance with the rules and regulations of the American Arbitration Association then in effect, provided that said arbitration shall be heard before a single arbitrator, selected pursuant to said rules and regulations. Said arbitrator shall be well acquainted with the entertainment business in the County of Los Angeles. The arbitrator's decision shall be controlled by the terms and conditions of this Release and shall be final and binding. Judgment upon the award of the arbitrator may be enforce in any court of competent jurisdiction. The prevailing party shall be entitled to recover from the losing party, in addition to all other relief to which it may be entitled, its costs and expenses, including, without limitation, actual outside attorney's fees and the costs of expert witnesses. In the event of any dispute concerning this Release, my sole remedy shall be to seek monetary damages in an action at law and in no event shall I be entitled to seek injunctive or other equitable relief, and without limitation of the forgoing, I expressly agree that I shall not seek to enjoin or restrain the production, exhibition, distribution, licensing, advertising, and/or promotion of any of Company's programming, promotional or marketing plans, and/or any of the rights in connection therewith. I agree that I must give Company written notice by certified or registered mail at its address set forth above of any claim arising in connection with the Material or this Release, within the period prescribed by the applicable statute of limitations, but in no event more than ninety (90) calendar days after the date on which I first acquire knowledge of such claim, or I first acquire knowledge of facts to put me on notice ofsuch a claim. My failure to give Company such written notice shall be deemed an irrevocable waiver of any rights I might otherwise have had with respect to such claim. Any monetary award favorable to me shall be an amount that company would pay me for similar property or elements as such similarity is determined by Company regardless of the commercial value of such property or Submission Release 3 elements. Except as may be required by law, neither a party nor an arbitrator may disclose the existence, content, or results of any arbitration hereunder without the prior written consent of both parties.
7. To the full extent permitted by law, I hereby release you from and I assume the risk of any and all claims, demands and liabilities of any kind whatsoever, known or unknown, that may arise in relation to the Material submitted or by reason of any claim now or hereafter made by me that you have used or appropriated the Material or any elements thereof. I freely waive any and all rights I may have under California Civil Code §1542 which states:
   • A general release does not extend to claims which the creditor does not know or suspect to exist in his or her favor at the time of executing the release, which if know by him or her must have materially affected his or her settlement with the debtor.
8. I have retained, or will retain, a copy of the Material, I acknowledge that Company does not intend to return to me any copies of the Material submitted to Company hereunder, and I hereby release Company of and from any and all liability for loss of, or damage to, such copies.
9. If the Material is submitted by more than one person, the word "I" shall be deemed changed to "we" (and the corresponding verb changed to the first person plural), and this Release will be binding jointly and severally upon all such persons. As used herein, "Company" shall be deemed to include Company, Company-related entities and its and their officers, directors, members, managers, employees, agents, contractors, licensees, representatives, successors, licensees and assigns.
10. Any provision or part of any provision which is void or unenforceable shall be deemed omitted, and this Release with such provision or part thereof omitted shall remain in full force and effect. This Release shall at all times be construed so as to carry out the purposes stated herein. This Release may not be changed modified or terminated or discharged except in writing signed by both Company and me.
11. This Release shall inure to the benefit of, and be binding upon, each of us and our respective heirs, successors, representatives, assigns and licensees. Company may freely assign and delegate any of its rights and obligations under this Release, in whole or in part, without my consent and upon such assignment, Company shall thereafter be released and discharged of and from any and all of its duties, obligations and liabilities arising under this Release, such assignment constituting a novation hereunder. I shall not have the right to assign my rights and/or obligations hereunder and any purported assignment shall be null and void.
12. I hereby state that I have read and understand this Release; that no oral representations of any kind have been made to me; that there are no prior or contemporaneous oral agreements in effect between us pertaining to said material; and that this Release states our entire understanding. I understand that I have the right to seek the advice of independent counsel concerning my rights, the provisions hereof, and the advisability of executing this document. Further, I acknowledge that I have been advised by Company, and Company have given me the opportunity, to seek the advice of independent counsel, and I acknowledge that I am executing this Release voluntarily after consultation with independent counsel or after intentionally deciding not to do so. Any signed copy of this Agreement delivered by facsimile or electronic transmission shall for all purposes be treated as if it had been delivered containing an original signature of the party whose signature appears in Submission Release 4 the facsimile or electronic transmission and shall be binding upon such party in the same manner as though an original signed copy had been delivered.