Screenwriting : "Savor" - short script feedback needed by Fechete Paul Cristian

Fechete Paul Cristian

"Savor" - short script feedback needed

Wrote this one night, to get rid of the idea that was bugging me. Would like to know if you think it's worth investing more time to make it shine. Logline: An eccentric chef finds the recipe for life itself, but pays a terrible price for it. Pages: 13. Link to script: http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/Savor.pdf Thanks.

Shawn Speake

Hey, Fechete! Think about uploading your script under LOGLINES on your profile. Studies show you'll achieve better results if people don't have to leave the network to check out your material.

Jean-Pierre Chapoteau

What a funny guy...

Tony Cella

I sent you a network request. If you email me your script, I'll take a look at it if you provide me some feedback as well. Sound good?

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