Screenwriting : Script swap by Scott Evans

Hello I have a script which is being turned into a podcast series. I am still honing aspects of it and I wonder if anyone would be interested in a script swap. You give me feedback on mine, and I will do the same for yours The Time Diary (MY SCRIPT) is a cautionary, ‘Be careful for what you wish for’ sci­-fi black comedy. Two young men discover that when you invent time travel, there is a lot more to it than merely peeking at all the cool gadgets in the future. Alternate time lines, murderous time travellers and the end of the world are just some of the problems David and Hank have to deal with, all from the comfort of their own living room. Thank you Scott