I am Neha Rajput from India.
This is the script sir I've written. It is my first short and horror script.
Can you tell me what should I improve in my writing format or in my story.
I know sir there are some grammer or spelling mistakes but please sir please don't focus on them please read my script and please tell me how I can improve myself in script format writing or story making.
My english is not to good sorry if I say something wrong.
THANK YOU
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1EMhY_NhslPoac5Gen6VL0H884r03zTmc/view?u...
Your script should be driven by the characters and their conflict, not by the action or description. Every scene should have a purpose and advance the story. If you find yourself with too much action or description, ask yourself if it is really necessary. Is there a way to show the same thing with less? Remember, less is often more when it comes to writing a screenplay.
Hello sir
This is the part 1 of this script, that's why some people don't understand what is happening what dose meaning of it. If you read part 2 you will understand why those things are happening.
By the way sir you didn't notice a thing in my script which I was saying again again again - A new artwork is created with Sunil's blood.
Did you understand this sir?
If you didn't don't worry I will explain you.
Art gallery is a place of billionaires there are no fans in there, maybe some places have but in most of the places don't have. They have only Air conditioner.
But in my script there is a fan in the room of main art gallery.
Sunil sees the reflection of the fan in coin.
There are different artworks made with red colour on fan.
If you see ya you go in any rich family they have only simple fan they don't have no designes on their fans.
But if you see I have written the artworks on the fan with red colour and after sunil gose inside the wall a new artwork is created on fan.
It's means the artworks on the fan are not artworks those are blood of many different people if you see carefully or test the blood you will know how many people died there and go inside the wall and Sunil is one of them.
That's the thing I wanted to show in my Script to readers but no-one even thing there is a fan in the art gallery.
In second part ART GALLERY (TRUTH) I will show who where they people, how did they die, where did they go, what happens with Sunil, the past life of Sunil, his lovers and the one he loves truly, her mother lover husband and her and her husband's child ect.
The second part story will be passed on science fiction, mystery, thriller, canibel writing ect.
Sorry sir if I say something wrong I didn't mean to hurt you.
THANK YOU
Hello Ma'am
I can not understand why did you send me this link, if you don't mind can you please tell me?