Screenwriting : Feedback by William Smith

William Smith

Feedback

Hi Everyone,

I've just upload a script for a short film that a friend and I have been collaborating on. We tried applying to the BFI for funding but sadly didn't get it. Nevertheless we're continuing to work on and would really appreciate feedback, so please check it out and let us know what you think

Thank you!!!

Maurice Vaughan

Is the script T.E.S., William Smith?

William Smith

Maurice Vaughan Yes it's T.E.S.

Maurice Vaughan

I don't see the script on the logline page, William Smith.

William Smith

Maurice Vaughan how odd, I'll check after work

Maurice Vaughan

Your script might be set to private, William Smith.

William Smith

Maurice Vaughan it should be there now

Maurice Vaughan

I just sent you a message, William Smith.

Nikolas John

Which one? T.E.S.?

Maurice Vaughan

That's the one, Nikolas John.

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