Hello, beautiful people of Stage32!
I'm new here and would truly appreciate your feedback on these two very short screenplays. I'm also experimenting with the strategy of writing short versions or teasers of ideas that are actually intended to become full-length films, so I'd love your thoughts on that approach as well.
- THE THRONE OF DOOM - https://www.stage32.com/loglines/64366
- THE TASTE OF TRUTH - https://www.stage32.com/loglines/64577
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I've checked out what you have.
I would suggest write a killer log line. This is surprisingly difficult!
https://industrialscripts.com/famous-logline-examples/
A high school chemistry teacher diagnosed with inoperable lung cancer turns to manufacturing and selling methamphetamine in order to secure his family’s future.
best of luck
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I'm grateful for your comments and your time!