Screenwriting : Logline and Synopsis feedback by Mark Thomson

Kia ora koutou,

I have added a few concept loglines and synopses to my profile. I am very interested in feedback. Some are very early stages and lack elements (character names and entities currently feel generic) while others I have been struggling to capture stories/truths within a limited space to really get readers/viewers excited.

I am a huge fan of unresolved issues/topics/narratives, in order to promote personal growth and internalizing to promote questions as well as discussion, so some that focus on social and cultural issues/taboos are very unresolved for that reason.

Thanks in advance

Ngā mihi nui

Mark