On Writing : How to work with a book editor - developmental, line, and copy edits by Lauren Hackney

Lauren Hackney

How to work with a book editor - developmental, line, and copy edits

Hi Authors and Playwrights,

Want to know the difference between a Developmental Editor, a Line Editor, a Copy Editor and a Proof-reader?

1. Developmental Editing (The "Big Picture")

Focus: Structure, plot, character arcs, pacing, theme, overall coherence, and concept.

Editor's Role: Acts as a critical reader, asking: Does the story work? Are characters believable? Is the plot logical?.

Your Role: Be open to significant rewrites, restructuring, adding/deleting scenes, and reimagining elements. You'll work closely with the editor to develop the core of the book.

2. Line Editing (The "Flow & Voice")

Focus: Sentence-level craft, clarity, word choice, rhythm, tone, and transitions.

Editor's Role: Polishes the prose, making it more engaging and precise, asking if each sentence is needed, clear, and well-written.

Your Role: Review suggestions for wordiness, awkward phrasing, and clarity; ensure the editor's changes enhance your unique voice.

3. Copyediting (The "Nitty-Gritty")

Focus: Correctness (grammar, spelling, punctuation, consistency) and clarity.

Editor's Role: Catches errors in syntax, punctuation, formatting, factual details (like dates or names), and ensures adherence to style guides (e.g., Chicago Manual of Style).

Your Role: Trust the copyeditor to find the small, easy-to-miss errors; focus on incorporating their fixes and reviewing for consistency.

4. Proofreading (The Final Polish)

Focus: Production errors (typos, widows/orphans, incorrect page numbers, bad breaks) in the final layout.

Editor's Role: A fresh pair of eyes to catch anything missed before printing/publishing.

Your Role: Don't revise; just check for production errors.

How to Work Together

Understand the Stages: The process flows from big-picture (Dev) to small details (Copy/Proof), often with rewrites between stages.

Communicate: Ask your editor questions about their feedback, especially during developmental edits.

Save Versions: Use software like Scrivener or save different drafts to avoid losing good work during major revisions.

Choose Wisely: Find editors with experience in your genre and topic for best results.

Maurice Vaughan

Thanks for breaking down the different roles and how to work together, Lauren Hackney!

Lauren Hackney

Thanks Maurice Vaughan :)

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Lauren Hackney. This info will come in handy if I write books.

Michael Thorn

An excellent breakdown Lauren - in practice 2 and 3 often elide.

Especially important: proofreading is the FINAL stage.

Too often writers send a document to be proofread, then make changes and don't keep a record of what they've altered, meaning the whole piece has to be proofread over gain.

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