Screenwriting : Do you think this is a masterclass in script writing? by James LO

James LO

Do you think this is a masterclass in script writing?

Ridley Scott’s Matchstick Men delivers Big Time, carried on the shoulders of Nic Cage, one of the most versatile actors alive.

Roy Waller counts his morning routine in precise repetitions, opens and closes doors according to rigid patterns, and maintains his pristine carpet with a fine-tooth comb. Somehow, from this OCD bubble, Roy manages to work elaborate cons with his partner Frank, the always amazing Sam Rockwell.

The arrival of Angela, a teenage girl who claims to be his daughter, is a grenade tossed into Roy’s carefully ordered world. She tracks dirt into his house, rummages through his belongings, asks uncomfortable questions, and generally represents everything his defense mechanisms were built to keep out.

Yet against all odds, we watch Roy learn to parent, late in life. We see him loosening his grip on his compulsions through the simple acts of caring for another person, whether he likes it or not. Cage finds the exact balance between portraying Roy’s professional suspicion and his growing hope that maybe he might be a real, and good, father after all.

(Spoilers alert needed for a 22 year-old film?)

This makes the third act revelation all the more gutting. The entire relationship has been an elaborate con orchestrated by Frank, who recruited Angela to steal Roy’s life savings.

She was never his daughter.

But, like the best cons, here comes the epilogue, where Matchstick Men reveals its real and most powerful truth.

Recalling his opening act obsession with carpets, Roy now sells the damn things, for real, living a completely straight life. A chance store visit by Angela braces us for the confrontation we’ve been primed by countless other movies to expect.

However, Roy forgives her completely.

He tells her that he doesn’t regret what happened, and the money was hers to take. With those scant lines of dialogue we’re shown something sublime—that those months of being a father, even to a fake daughter, mattered more than anything else in his entire life.

For viewers who aren’t parents, I wonder if this scene might seem implausible. But as a father watching this film, that denouement destroyed me.

The almost absurd paradox is, Roy found grace through a lie constructed to exploit his specific vulnerability. The relationship that deeply reshaped him was as artificial as any con he himself had ever run, yet the transformation was real.

We live in a culture obsessed with the real, with unmasking frauds and exposing deceptions, with the idea that only genuine things have value, and that discovering something was fake retroactively dissolves whatever meaning it ever held.

But Roy proves this is not always the case.

The Angela in his heart, the daughter he loved and worried about and tried awkwardly to guide, was real—his love made her real.

This is why Roy can forgive Angela so completely, despite the money she stole from him. Because of what she inadvertently gave him: a better version of himself he’d never known existed.

Was anyone else moved by the twist in the epilogue of this screenplay?

Maurice Vaughan

I haven't read or seen Matchstick Men, but I'll check them out, James LO. Thanks.

Maurice Vaughan

I get a "Not Found" message when I click the link, James LO.

James LO

Maurice Vaughan i still see the script. maybe try using a different browser? or I’d just google search for the script—it’s from 2003, should be in a couple of places

Maurice Vaughan

I found it online, James LO. Thanks.

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