Hello, I'm Chase Carmichael.
A screenwriter from Tooele, Utah. I have previously worked on my superhero concepts (City Knights is a duo fox superheroes, Starbright is a pine marten superhero, and Typhoon is a dog morphed into a blue monster who uses water manipulation) that shared the same city.
City Knights or Ember Vanguards are basically bipedal fox versions of Captain America (Steve Rogers) and Captain Carter (Peggy Carter from Marvel's What If?) except they get powers from either an explosion or get aesthetic powers from objects. But the inciting incident has to be catastrophic that hit their previous town and the fire department gets disbanded and relocated into Brook City. They live in Grandville, home of first responders from past and present.
Starbright is a bipedal pine marten version of Ironheart (Riri Williams) and Ghost Spider (Gwen Stacy) with her desire for martens to be included into Brook City. She lives in Dewey Park filled with art-enthusiastic animals and her mother's bakery.
Lastly, Typhoon is a dog version of She-Hulk (Jennifer Walters) but a blue version and scientific intelligence version of Mr. Fantastic (Reed Richards), Except that the character is using water manipulation while in her blue monstrous form. She lives in Sapphire Springs the science community that's home of solar energy plants, science academies, scientific headquarters, and their scientific homes north of Brook City.
These three concepts are basically inspired by six Marvel superheroes depending on the positive tones.
However, my scripts are AI-written and probably my season/series bibles are AI-written too.
I want to find a colleague who lives in Utah who understands everything there is to know.
Screenwriters, Script Consultants, Producers, Illustrators, and any positions.
I just wish I could meet them personally at the nearby coffee place and discuss further details.
I have trouble connecting with people who'll understand my creativity.
I'm not lucky to find one, even If I find great colleagues outside of Utah, I don't trust myself on spending hundreds of dollars to get it polished or anything just because they're not from Utah.
I know that I told you guys that I'm currently working on an animated sitcom about a family of foxes and their passion for baseball.
But my previous creativity came back to me. It's trial and error for my creativity.
Some of the previous concepts are bound to be revitalized. I just want to meet anyone who lives in Utah who is willing to help me.
I cannot do this on my own or the confidence with my money-spending.
My concepts are two things: heart and comedy despite the genre. Even four factors: Emotional, human, entertaining, and rewatchable.
Regardless, I just need local help. I'm sorry for asking for all of this.
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i’m not from Utah, but I could just tell you that I’m not really sure what your vision is. It’s kind of all over the place. are you looking for a way to fit Marvel style superheroes mixed with cute animals mix with first responder type community values into one specific universe? If so, maybe the fire department has dalmatian dogs that go with them on a call and end up getting powers?
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You're right. I just want to make sure I can get through. Not sure if bipedal dalmatians work for me because it's too generic and cliche for my taste, I would add a dalmatian character as a fire chief but that's about it.
I meant three different aspects or narratives into one shared universe. The first story is the origin of a scrawny firefighters become super-solder type firefighters but they're more than just fire, they're fighting to protect their new home and threats. Kip the bipedal blue Fox and Kacey the bipedal red fox gets super-solder abilities from the explosion.
Do you have other questions, like the "Stabright" concept or "Typhoon" concept?
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Good points…. Hmm…. Have you considered a natural disaster for your inciting incident? Or a meteor shower? Maybe meteorites with star dust that causes super powers? Sorry if that’s also cliche, I’m new to screenwriting
The first concept is when a fire hit the laboratory by accident and their fire department by arson and the lab explodes the firefighters, the two firefighters gets super-soldier style bodies and gets relocated to a big city after their fire department being disbanded.
The second concept is when a female bipedal marten saw the futuristic necklace and it woke up, analyzing her, and gave her full ion-suited powers with a featureless mask.
The third concept is a lab accident of a female bipedal dog getting exposed in the dangerous lab area but the blue liquid falls on her, the smell puts her in a coma, and then, a rainy day later, she morphs into a 7'0" muscular blue bipedal dog with longer hair and controls water.
No meteor showers, no cosmic radiation, no gamma bomb explosion, and not even an accidental getting bit by a radioactive spider. I'm just thinking origins out of organic ideas.
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Ok well the reason you’re having trouble is probably your lack of openness to other suggestions. It sounds like you have a very specific story you want to tell but based on your ai use and lack of partner skills you are just wanting someone or something else to write it for you. Either way I wish you luck.
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Yes, you're right. Thanks, Kourtney.
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Make it into a comic book!
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That’s a good idea Preston
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One page is enough to start a conversation!
Preston. That's what my writing peers told me when I wrote superhero screenplays. I just felt writing through graphic novels can be time-consuming when you're doing it by yourself. You have to be an artist and wrote things in ink. That's why I would prefer laptops and screenwriting software. Sam, yea it sure does.